Tuesday, 17 April 2012

On the Baseline Representation

On the Baseline - Representation 

As part of the advanced portfolio I produced a trailer for a film “On the baseline” which was a hybrid genre combining key conventions of chick flicks and sports films.  The film followed a tennis theme and revolved around the development of a relationship of a new women’s doubles partnership comprising of a champion and an “underdog”. 

Representation is the process by which the media presents the “real world” to an audience.  All texts, including mine, are mediated constructed representations.  Representations in media texts are often simplistic and reinforce dominant ideologies so that audiences can make sense of them.  My trailer tries to tries to gently challenge this approach whilst still focusing on meeting my audience expectations.

Ideology

A media text will always have an ideology that will be communicated explicitly or implicitly to an audience (eg images of women).  It is a system of belief that is constructed and presented by the media text. Many critics argue that the media reinforce traditional ideologies, consciously or unconsciously emphasizing male supremacy and reducing women to sexualised, subordinate and maternal roles.  The representation of sportsmen in the media are generally positive and used to glorify them whereas the representations of women playing sport are often far less positive.  In this respect, my trailer challenges the dominant ideologies evident in a patriarchal society and celebrates “girl power!”  The value that I am promoting is that hard work pays off, never give in and you can achieve your dreams.  Again, this is in contrast to the instant celebrity culture to which many young people in society today seem to aspire to. 

The representations in the trailer are definitely the products of my own cultural experience, background, values and ideology as a serious sportswomen and teenage girl.  I have, as a producer with a feminist outlook, intentionally tried to encode the production and position the audience in order to induce a “preferred reading” (Stuart Hall) from my target audience. The “preferred reading” of the trailer is that with hard work and self belief girls can achieve their sporting dreams.

Hybrid Genre

In A2 my confidence improved as I identified institutional techniques which have become conventions of both genres and creatively combined the 2 to create a hybrid genre “sports flick” that would appeal to a main audience of teenage girls and a secondary niche audience of tennis fans.  Through research into the conventions of real media texts it became apparent that the themes explored in chick flicks and women’s sports films are very much the same which is why they are so appealing to the same female target audience.  Themes of conflict are evident in both genres whether it be an interpersonal conflict between the protagonist and another character the conflict seems to lie on some personal issue or goal eg winning a competition.  My aim was to make the representations seem “true” and meaningful through exploiting genre conventions by producing a teaser trailer that was not entirely formulaic but included enough familiar paradigms to capture the interest of my target audience.
                                    
Key Themes

My trailer has a wide range of themes and polysemic meanings: comedy, girl rivalry, friendship, relationships, teamwork and ends up being constructed into a fairytale underdog win signifying “girl power” for the convenience of the audience to enjoy. 

The relationship between the 2 young women provides the conflict and dynamic which drives the plot forward; this means that the trailer defines the women through their relationships with each other rather than to men. However, the dominance of the female characters does not necessarily mean that the representations are positive – part of the conflict in the trailer is to do with the resentment between characters thrust into a relationship – far from the feminist idea of sisterhood.  This conflict is emphasized through the use of a first person voice over expressing the point of view of the main character at the start of the trailer.  This added to the realism of the production for my target audience by incorporating a familiar feature that is stereotypical of the chick flick genre and establishes the champion as the person with power mediating events for the audience.  The use of the voice over also allows the context, cause and effect of the problem to be quickly and clearly established. The tone of the mode of address makes her level of dissatisfaction with her new partner apparent to the audience who are confined to this characters perceptual subjectivity and positioned to support the champion’s view that her partner is “useless.”

Representation of Gender

Stereotypical characterisations and representations from the chick flick genre where adapted and incorporated into the trailer in order to appeal to and engage the target audience.  For example the inspiration for portraying the champion tennis player as the stereotypical chick flick “Queen Bee” came from the film “Mean Girls” and was designed to appeal to teenage girls. The representation of the champion as a stereotypical sports girl draws on Winships theory of notion portraying an ideal version of “fake consciousness” to teenage girls, what most aspire to be.  In contrast, the underdog was visually represented with Barthes theory of connotations and denotations as a guide.  Her leopard spotted headband, bright purple top and brightly coloured make up are designed to create the impression of a “plastic” bimbo rather than a sports girl. Stereotypical iconography in the form of mise en scene (ie costume, props, facial expressions, body language) was used to form the stereotype which enhanced the realism of the trailer as audiences identify with them. The selective use of dialogue reinforces the stereotypical lack of confidence often evident amongst teenage girls “ I’ll never be good enough” – designed to draw an emotive response from the audience.  Sound effects are also used creatively to reinforce the stereotype and add the conventional chick flick humour.  A non diegetic sound effect in the form of a “boiiing” is used parallel to the moment in the trailer where the underdog collapses in a heap whilst trying to do a push up.

However, the character portrayed by the champion is intentionally not totally stereotypical and has been designed to challenge dominant ideology by raising interesting questions about the representation of gender, particularly the way in which strong women are often signified through masculine characteristics such as competitiveness, determination and desire to win.  The representation supports Judith Butler’s (1998) suggestion that we should see gender as free floating and fluid rather than fixed as it dependent on performance acts (how we behave at difference times).  My trailer also supports Angela McRobbie’s claim that “There has been a change in focus from representation of the passive, dependent female to a more confident focus on self.” In addition, Mulveys concept of male gaze would apply in part to her appearance eg long blond hair, slim physique, tennis clothing symbolising a confident, successful girl. However, I did want to avoid the objectification of the female characters in the trailer particularly through the use of aspects of mise en scene.  For example, the costume in my trailer is predominantly the clothing and equipment needed for the sport and related fitness activities the young women take part in – tennis.  The clothing is functional and worn for a purpose rather than to accentuate feminine characteristics.  The props (such as rackets, balls, fitness ladders, medicine balls, weights, ropes) also emphasize the physical strength and ability of the key antagonist.  Also the setting of the trailer on the tennis court means that the characters are placed in an environment that is stable and not reflective of them as individuals – this removes the opportunity for women to be objectified by the audience. 

On reflection I can now see how my role in this production was that of an auteur in that my own ideology, personality and outlook on life heavily influenced all aspects of the production. Particularly, the decision to create a hybrid genre which gave me license to subvert some of the stereotypical representations of women as vulnerable females desperate for love often evident in chick flicks.  So, whilst the underdog complies with the chick flick convention, the champion, in many ways, subverts it.  The champion is more typical of the female characters found in sports films which tend to have a much more positive representation of the strength, determination and talent of women.  This combination and more balanced representation of young women sits more comfortably with my own ideology.  The confirms Gauntlett (2007) opinion that people do not just get represented by the media anymore.  Instead they use Web 2.0 platforms to make their own media, share it with the world and represent themselves – which is what I have done in my production.


Representation of Men

Whilst the two female players dominate the trailer it is stereotypically the male character (the coach) who is represented as holding a position of authority.  His portrayal in the trailer is paradoxical:  in his relationship with the champion he is the instiller of discipline.  For example, he aggressively confronts the champion when she arrives late at training. “You’re late,” and the tone of the dialogue is reinforced through the ominous loud ticking noise of the stopwatch emphasized further through the use of a zoom in.  This acted literally as a ticking bomb which drew an equally aggressive response from the champion “…. and she’s useless so we will make a right double act!”  This open questioning of authority and lack of respect could represent a negative stereotypical view of teenagers and demonstrates that whilst the male is certainly not portrayed as the dominant character even though he tries to be.

In contrast, his relationship with the underdog is that of a motivator fulfilling what Propps describes as the dispatcher/helper role.  This role is highlighted through the incorporation of a motivational sound motif accompanying his interactions with the new player.  The high and low angle shots give representation of a mutually accepted and established authoritative relationship between the underdog and the coach. 

The representation of the coach in this regard is that of a tolerant, patient motivator within a fiercely competitive sport.  Whilst this is a positive representation it is not necessarily a realistic one as in high level sport if you’re not good enough you get dropped.  On reflection, in a way I have “Disneyfied” the storyline to make it more appealing to the target market. This supports Buckingham’s view that “The media do not just offer us a transparent “window on the world” but a mediated version of the world.  They don’t just present reality, they re-present it.”

Representation of Age

Stereotypically the old coach is portrayed as being wise and the possessor of knowledge gained from vast experience.  This is shown by his confident “Trust me she’s got potential” statement when visual representations of the underdog in action seem to indicate to the audience that this he is deluded. His support for his protégé is emphasized through the repetition of the word ‘potential’ and the breaking of the 180 degree rule. The older coach is also displayed as what Propps terms the “donor”, although he doesn’t give the newcomer a magical object he gives her the strong words of wisdom of ‘treat those two imposters the same’ and inspiration, just before she starts to improve her tennis.  He also shows his maturity in acting as the mediator between the two players.

In terms of the representation of young people we are initially presented with binary opposites:  the champion is a stroppy, over confident, talented player who shows disrespect for authority whilst the underdog is more subservient, laid back and conforms to authority.  As the trailer progresses the differences erode as both players undergo a personal transformation – the champion is more tolerant and the underdog has proven her self to be a determined and resilient girl.  Richard Dyer states that:  “The ideological work of stereotyping involves closing down the range of possible meanings, making fast, firm, and separate what is in reality fluid.”  The transformation of the characters evident as the trailer progresses shows that the initial stereotypical representations are not fixed but fluid.  The girls grow in maturity before the audiences eyes in the quest to achieve a common goal.

Representation of Class and Status

At the start of the trailer the underdog is represented as an outcast in the tight knit tennis fraternity.  Her appearance is unconventional, her ability as shown in the action shots is not of the appropriate standard and she is initially presented as a bit of an uncoordinated clown.  Close ups were used throughout the trailer to show the emotional struggle of the face of the underdog particularly when she tells the audience “I’ll never be good enough” and tries desperately to fit in.

The contrast in background, status and power is emphasized through the use of wide angle shots showing the girls training together.  Both girls are simultaneously in the frame which initially gives the audience a view of the differences in ability, dress and levels of confidence.  Through the use of fast motion and fast cutting in the scene the audience could see the speed at which the underdog was improving and get emotionally involved in the race against time.  The action sequence is accompanied with an upbeat “Rocky” inspired soundtrack with supports the ideological representation of the girls determination to make it work together.  The montage of shots finishes with the 2 girls performing synchronized star jumps in perfect time together with the connotation that they have formed a partnership and the underdog is starting to be accepted into the tennis society.

This process of societal acceptance was also emphasized through the use of a slow motion close up of the girls shaking hands at the end of a practice match in which the underdog beat the champion.  The handshake symbolised a change in the character of the champion and a shift in power within their relationship. By the end of the trailer the underdog has been transformed from what Klapp’s (1962) terms a stereotype (those who don’t belong, are outside of one’s society) to a social type who “belongs” to society.

On reflection, I do feel that I could have made more of the changing status of the underdog towards the end of the trailer.  This could have been achieved through changing her outward appearance / costume to give a more professional tennis player image and symbolising that she had finally started to belong to the tennis society into which she had been thrust.  Through hard work and determination the underdog has achieved acceptance and social mobility which suggests that the boundaries of social class may be fluid.

Representation of Race


In terms of the representation of race in the trailer the cast consists of white players and a white coach which accurately reflects the ethnic profile of players in what is predominantly a white, middle class sport.

In conclusion, in a short space of time the audience is taken on an emotional roller coaster ride moving them towards a range very emotive and ideological outcomes which combine: seriousness, feeling sorry for the underdog, laughing at how bad she is and then willing her to get better.  All of which lead to a moral and obvious conclusion:  we expect the underdog to come out on top in this genre of films.  Hence, in some respects my trailer could be accused of “injecting everything with the sameness” (Adorno) by replicating many features of the conventional chick flick and the focus on simplistic representations.  Central to these production decisions was the need to gratify my main target audience and the knowledge that challenging too many conventional expectations for the genre could threaten the integrity of the text.   However, I have tried to challenge dominant patriarchal ideology with the outcome of the narrative which provides the audience with a positive representation of women as serious professional sport people willing to work hard to achieve a goal in life.  As a producer I tried to fulfil a challenging balance that would engage my audience in gratification, suspense and surprise in a 2 minute trailer that reflected the brand image of my production company “Sports Flick Films” and my own personal ideology.

On the Baseline Audience Theory

On the Baseline - How I attracted my target audience.

As part of the advanced portfolio I produced a trailer for a film “On the Baseline” which was a hybrid genre combining key conventions of chick flicks and sports films (sports flick!).  The film followed a tennis theme and revolved around the development of a relationship of a new women’s doubles partnership comprising of a champion and an “underdog”.  The main target audience for the film was teenage girls with a secondary niche audience of tennis fans.In my production I looked to exploit genre conventions by producing a teaser trailer that was not entirely formulaic but included enough familiar paradigms to capture the interest of my target audience.
Audience Research
Primary research, in the form of a questionnaire, was used to obtain the views of my target audience. Web 2.0 technology, in the form of the social networking site Facebook was used to post my questionnaire to my target audience, with the knowledge that most people would receive them and to increase my response rate.   The feedback was very constructive and influenced key creative decisions such as the removal of the conventional “chick flick” use of a deep male voice over to narrate the trailer.  This was edited and replaced with a voice over of the main character which created a more personal relationship with the audience.  Also 30% of the audience indicated that the music that was used in the original trailer was not appealing. I responded to the feedback by creating the soundtrack myself in Garage band and through the insertion of sound effects which would add a comedy dimension to the trailer.  Through Web 2.0 technology (You tube and Facebook) my audience became “interactive” engaged in the development of the trailer which reflects what Jenkins has termed the “Participatory culture” in which an active audience contributes to the creation and sharing of media content.

In depth qualitative audience research was also undertaken to inform the planning of my trailer.  3 focus groups were established:  teenage girls, adults and sports fans.  The purpose of the interview with each group was to try to establish the features of trailers that particular appealed to them.   This feedback provided much of the basis of my creative decision making.  The feedback from the adults revealed that they didn’t like trailers to give too much of the plot away and that they enjoyed humour in trailers. Teenage girls stated that they liked the music to establish the character for them (sound motifs). Sports fans said that they enjoyed references to famous sporting sayings to be used in the trailer to attract their attention. I incorporated their views by making the trailer time relatively short 1 minute 31 seconds. Humour was incorporated through the use of sound effects and iconic sporting references were incorporated to appeal to the sports fans. 
On reflection, this primary research could have been supplemented with an analysis of existing data relating to the consumption habits of the target audience.

Choice of Genre and the Development of Intertextuality
According to Katie Wales, “genre is …. an intertextual concept” in that relationships with other similar texts is a way of creating meaning and appeal to the audience. John Corner notes that “genre is a principal factor in the directing of audience choice and of audience expectations.”   In my production references to other real media texts and conventions evident in similar productions helps to establish familiarity for the audience and to help them understand the meanings and representations made.  The trailers analysed consisted mainly sports related films that tackled similar issues involving the underdog coming through to triumph over adversity (ie Bend it like Beckham, Wimbledon, Dodgeball, Coach Carter, A League of their Own) and chick flicks (ie Mean Girls, Not another Teen Movie) focusing on the culture of typical teenage girls.

Recognisable themes
My trailer has a wide range of themes and polysemic meanings: comedy, girl rivalry, friendship, relationships, teamwork and ends up being constructed into a fairytale underdog win signifying “girl power” for the convenience of the audience to enjoy.  The notion of conflict as a central theme to a film will be a familiar concept to my target audience as both chick flicks and sports films tend to involve an interpersonal conflict between the protagonist and another character and the conflict seems to revolve around some personal issue or goal eg winning a competition. 
 Konigsberg (1987) suggests that enduring genres reflect “universal dilemnas” and “moral  conflicts” and appeal to deep psychological needs. The trailer contains universal dilemma in the form of girl rivalry, the desire to win and be accepted.  Moral conflict is also evident in the win at all costs mentality shown by the champion and the poor treatment of the underdog.  The audience is invited to make a moral stand: Is winning all that matters?  Should we write someone off so early?  Do we help or abandon the underdog?
Structure of the Narrative
My trailer followed a simple linear form of restricted narrative.  It follows a conventional narrative structure in that: in terms of plot development there is a logical relation between one event and another; a sense of closure at the end (although the audience is left with an enigma); the story is focused on the characters and a narrative style that attempts by the end of the trailer to be more or less objective.  A desire to reach a goal (winning a tennis doubles championship) propels the story.
One of the key features of any text is the need to deliver certain gratifications or “pleasures” to the audience.  Teenage girls are likely to have the “cultural capital” or genre knowledge needed to follow the familiar structure of a chick flick plot. So in terms of story structure in my trailer they are “pleasured” by knowing Todorovs pattern of equilibrium, disequilibrium, equilibrium unfold before them in a predictable and familiar way. 
As the trailer progresses “Cognitive” satisfactions may be derived from problem solving, testing hypotheses, making inferences (eg about the motivations and goal of characters) and making predictions about events eg does the underdog have potential?  Will she be good enough in time for the tournament?  Will the girls ever get along?  etc . Also the open ended nature of the ending of the trailer leaves the audience in suspense as they are left with what Barthes terms an “enigma” (will the girls triumph in the championship?) that can only be solved through going to see the full length feature film. 
Creating a Sense of Personal Identity (through Stereotypical Characters)
Stereotypical characterisations from the chick flick genre where adapted and incorporated into the trailer in order to appeal to and engage the target audience.  Blulmer and Katz (1974) in their uses and gratifications theory stated that audiences enjoy media texts when they help meet our need to define our sense of personal identity. Part of our sense of self is informed by making judgements about all sorts of people and when we see our own behaviours reflected in the texts. The target audience could challenge and reinforce their own values as they watch the trailer unfold.  For example the inspiration for portraying the champion tennis player as the stereotypical chick flick “Queen Bee” came from the film “Mean Girls” and was designed to appeal to teenage girls. The representation of the champion as a stereotypical sports girl draws on Winships theory of notion portraying an ideal version of “fake consciousness” to teenage girls, what most aspire to be.  Mulveys concept of male gaze would apply to her appearance eg long blond hair, slim physique, tennis clothing symbolising a confident, successful girl. In contrast, the underdog was dressed with Barthes theory of connotations and denotations as a guide.  Her leopard spotted headband, bright purple top and brightly coloured make up are designed to create the impression of a “plastic” bimbo rather than a sports girl. Stereotypical iconography in the form of mis en scene (ie costume, props, facial expressions, body language) was used to form the stereotypes which enhances the realism of the trailer as audiences identify with them. 

Satisfying the Need for Integration and Social Interaction
Dennis McQuail suggests that some audiences are motivated by the need for integration and social interaction.  The trailer does provide an insight into the circumstances of other teenage girls with whom they can identify and perhaps use as substitutes for real life companionship.  They may also gain reassurance from the sense of belonging that the underdog eventually achieves which they may be striving for in their live.  Similarly, they may gain reassurance from the fact that the outcast at the start of the film finds friendship and success.  Audiences consuming the trailer will fulfil needs identified by Maslow in his hierarchy of needs ie self esteem and the gaining of respect are evident in the outcome in that the underdog comes out on top.
Developing a Personal Relationship
Blulmer and Katz (1974) in the Uses and Gratifications model also identify the audiences need to establish personal relationships as a motivational force for selecting media texts.  The formation of a virtual relationship between the audience and text is achieved through a variety of devices:
The Bend it Like Beckham trailer used a voice over to provide narration throughout rather than just  to introduce the initial action whilst I replicated this I also subverted the traditional convention of chick flicks (which often use a deep male voice) by using the voice of the main character to narrate events from her point of view.  This change from the male voice was made as a direct result of feedback received from my target audience.  The use of the first person narration creates an immediate connection between the audience and the main character who outlined the setting, situation and dilemna of the film from her point of view.  The mode of address positioned the audience in the role of the champions confidante. 

Making moral and emotional judgements on the actions of characters may also offer a particular pleasure. The restricted narrative in the voice over initially positions the audience to passively accept the champions interpretation of events.  As the trailer progresses their empathy switches as a result of the behaviour shown by the champion particularly the aggressive comment that her new partner is “useless.”  In order to change the audiences allegiance and establish their support for the underdog a series of close ups were used throughout the trailer.  For example, the audience was drawn in to the emotional struggle faced by the underdog when through a close up she tells the audience directly “I’ll never be good enough.”   
Also a slow motion close up was also used when the girls were shaking hands at the end of a practice match in which the underdog won symbolised a surprising change in the character of the champion.  In contrast, long shots were used in a fast motion action sequence to show both girls in the same frame when training.  This gave the audience the privileged perspective of viewing the different abilities of the players but also allowed them to witness the coming together of the girls at the end of the sequence.  The fast motion emphasized the race against time and the speed at which the underdog was improving.  The montage of shots finishes with the 2 girls performing synchronized star jumps in perfect time together with the connotation that they have formed a partnership and are working positively together.  The intensity of the sequence is increased for the audience through the accompanying non diegetic sound in the form a “Rocky” inspired soundtrack I composed on Garageband to add to the motivational and upbeat tone being set in the scene.
Diversion and the Entertainment Factor (through the Use of Humour)
Also, in order to gratify the audiences need for “diversion” (Blulmer and Katz) and to meet their expectations of comedy which is often embedded in click flicks, sound was used creatively to add humour.  A scene from Dodgeball was the inspiration for the footage of the underdog struggling with a training routine and a “boiing” sound effect was inserted as she collapsed in a push up.   My post production audience evaluation indicated that the target audience appreciated the inclusion of the sound effect.
Incorporating Sporting Iconography that appeals to the secondary niche audience
In terms of sports films, a common theme across the genre involves an underdog triumphing against the odds which is the key narrative theme of my trailer.  Sports films also tended to contain references, iconography, technical language or sayings that held a special significance to fans of the sport.
The trigger to the main action of the trailer beginning was the use of the famous John McEnroe saying ‘You cannot be serious’ from lead character reflecting the views of the sports fans.  Other sporting references are used to appeal directly to secondary target audience, for example the title “On the Baseline” will connotations that can be read by tennis fans as the character being on the defensive / has her back against the wall and the famous Wimbledon “Triumph and Disaster?” reference is used to trigger a narrative enigma.  The trailer is also set entirely on a tennis court which adds to the verisimilitude.
Preferred Reading and Personal Ideology
On reflection, I can now also see how my role in this production was that of an auteur in that my own ideology, personality and outlook on life heavily influenced all aspects of the production (not just genre conventions or audience expectations).  I have, as a producer, tried to encode the production and position the audience in order to induce a “preferred reading” (Stuart Hall) from my target audience. The “preferred reading” of the trailer is that with hard work and self belief girls can achieve their sporting dreams.  It is designed to provide the audience of teenage girls with a feel good factor and sense of satisfaction from witnessing and being part of personal transformation of both underdog and champion.
In conclusion, in a short space of time the audience is taken on an emotional roller coaster ride moving them towards a range very emotive and ideological outcomes which combine: seriousness, feeling sorry for the underdog, laughing at how bad she is and then willing her to get better.  All of which lead to a moral and obvious conclusion:  we expect the underdog to come out on top in this genre of films.  The need to gratify my main target audience and the knowledge that challenging too many conventional expectations for the genre could threaten the integrity of the text were central to my production decisions.   However, I have tried to challenge dominant patriarchal ideology with the outcome of the narrative which provides the audience with a positive representation of women as serious professional sport people willing to work hard to achieve a goal in life.  As a producer I tried to fulfil a challenging balance that would engage my audience in gratification, suspense and surprise in a 2 minute trailer that reflected the brand image of my production company “Sports Flick Films” and my own personal ideology.



On the Baseline Narrative Theory

One The Baseline - Narrative Theory

As part of the advanced portfolio I produced a trailer for a film “On the baseline” which was a hybrid genre combining key conventions of chick flicks and sports films.  The film followed a tennis theme and revolved around the development of a relationship of a new women’s doubles partnership comprising of a champion and an “underdog”. 

The term narrative is defined as “a chain of events in a cause – effect relationship occurring in time.” (Bordwell and Thompson 1980).

My trailer followed a simple linear form of restricted narrative.  It follows a conventional narrative structure in that: in terms of plot development there is a logical relation between one event and another; a sense of closure at the end (although the audience is left with an enigma); the story is focused on the characters and a narrative style that attempts to be more or less objective.  A desire to reach a goal (winning a tennis doubles championship) propels the story.

The meaning of my trailer is established pretty quickly. The overall plot of the story is explained through the use of a first person voice over expressing the point of view of the main character at the start of the trailer.  This added to the realism of the production for my target audience by incorporating a familiar feature that is stereotypical of the chick flick genre.  The use of the voice over also allows the context, cause and effect of the problem to be quickly and clearly established. The tone of the mode of address makes her level of dissatisfaction with her new partner apparent to the audience who are confined to this characters perceptual subjectivity. The extent of the problem is then revealed to the audience through a short action sequence showing the underdog playing tennis badly – a sequence designed to position the audience to support the champion’s view that her partner is “useless” and encourage them to write the underdog off in their minds as well.  Having evoked this initial reaction in the audience their thoughts are then surprisingly challenged by the coaches confident repeatedly expressed belief that the underdog has “potential” and his supportive words of wisdom to her. This is designed to get the audience questioning their initial reaction to the underdog and position them to think positively about what may lay ahead. The meaning and moral evident throughout the trailer is never to underestimate or write off the underdog.

However, in hindsight I did miss out on an opportunity to be more creative with the narrative structure.  In trying to comply with chick flick convention through the use of a voice over I did not consider the possibility of creating a multi strand narrative whereby the different perspectives of the 2 rivals (binary opposites) were presented to the audience for consideration.  This, combined with the clever use of parallel editing would have positioned the audience in the heart of the battle between the antagonist and protagonist – metaphorically being hit from one side of the court to the other!

The structure of the narrative also complies with many aspects of Todorov’s theory of equilibrium.  Todorov sees narrative as following a common pattern of movement from a stable equilibrium to disruption of the equilibrium to a reordered equilibrium (achieved by action being taken against the force causing the disruption.)  Equilibrium is established at the start of my trailer as the audience is presenting with an action sequence showing a series of shots in accelerated motion denoting a superb tennis player. The audiences confidence in the stability of the situation is reaffirmed through the use of a upbeat fast soundtrack playing in the background and a voice over of the player informing them that she has won Wimbledon ‘5 times’.  A picture of a successful star is established in the mind of the audience.   As the trailer progresses the onset of disequilibrium is signified by the sudden stoppage of the soundtrack playing and the character on screen shrieking the iconic John McEnroe saying ‘You cannot be serious’ into the camera (using a close up shot to emphasize the anger in the facial expression) and at the audience when she sees her new partner for the first time.  This marks the start of a period of disequilibrium in which it becomes apparent to the audience and the champion player that her new doubles partner is not capable of performing at the highest level.   Following Todorovs theory the trailer indicates that equilibrium is likely to be re-established in the scene when the underdog beats her new doubles partner in a practice match. By the end of the trailer we hope harmony is fully restored when the pair join forces to compete for the first time in the doubles competition.  This indicates the problem has been solved.

The structure of my goal orientated plot also follows some aspects of Chris Voglers theory that any story about a hero undertaking a journey involves several stages including:  the hero’s ordinary world is established (through the voice over and action sequence) and she is given a challenge or quest (winning a tennis championship); following ordeals (bonding with a new partner /training / practice matches) and the achievement of goals the hero returns to the ordinary world as a changed person.  This transformation in character accurately describes the change in nature of the champions character by the end of the trailer.

Levis Strauss suggested that narrative structure depends upon binary oppositions.  The concept is reflective of the representation of the main characters in my trailer in which the champion and the underdog are shown as the two binary opposites for the majority of the trailer. The champion is athletic, outspoken, fast, mean and serious. She is the stereotypical “chick flick” Queen Bee and the mise en scene presents her as a tall slim, well polished female tennis player, a ‘Male Gaze’ (Mulvey). In contrast, the underdog is presented as unathletic, slow, silly and too nice. Through the use of costume (eg leopard spotted headband, bright make up) and props (oversize clown like tennis ball) she is presented as being out of place in the sporting world and unconfident. However, the audience witnesses the gradual erosion of the binary opposition between them as the trailer progresses.  A slow motion and pause on the handshake following a practice game in which the underdog beats the champion denotes a significant change in the relationship between the 2 girls.  This is followed at the end of the trailer with an establishing shot showing the two girls walking off court in slow motion together suggesting to the audience that they are no longer rivals but ‘a team’. By the end of the trailer the audience has been cleverly positioned to hope that the two girls finish their emotional journey by uniting to win a championship.

On reflection, the handshake symbolised a surprising change in the character of the champion.  Whilst this was emphasised through the use of slow motion, zoom in and pause I do feel that I could have made more of this event by changing aspects of the mise en scene in subsequent shots particularly the costume and appearance of the underdog to give her a more professional image thus creating a sense that she was beginning to belong and be accepted in the tennis society into which she had been thrust.

My Trailer also complies with some of Propp’s theory relating to characters typically found in stories. Propp stated that there were 8 typical roles adopted by characters. Although my trailer on the surface doesn’t seem to reflect Propps theory (partly due to it being a small scale production with a limited number of characters) a deeper analysis indicates that my characters are in some respects multi dimension in nature in that they did adopt multiple roles similar to those described by Propps as the trailer progressed.  For example, the “Villain/false hero” is portrayed in the champions character, whereby at the start we are told in the voice over she has won Wimbledon 5 times, this gives us the impression of a hero. However later we see how mean she is towards the underdog aggressively calling her ‘useless.’  This demonstrates that she is actually very mean and the villain in parts of the story.  The dispatcher/helper role is displayed in the character of the coach, as he always supports the underdog no matter how poorly she plays.  This is shown by his confident repetition of the word ‘potential’ to describe the underdog before a fade in shows the audience her collapsing comically in a push up. The coach is also displayed as what Propps terms the “donor”, although he doesn’t give the newcomer a magical object he gives her the strong words of wisdom of ‘treat those two imposters the same’ and inspiration, just before she starts to improve her tennis. By the end of the trailer the underdog becomes the hero, having risen to the challenge and through meeting the expectations of the villain.

I also used a narrative of events to create suspense during my trailer. This was achieved by using a soundtrack of upbeat music combined with lots of fast cutting action scenes of the underdog desperately training to get better at tennis.  Fast motion and the use of diegetic sound in the form of the coach’s stop watch loudly ticking was used to create suspense amongst the audience as they get the sense that the underdog is in a desperate rush to get better and also creates the enigma of whether she will make it in time or not.

I also created suspense and intrigue using the narrative of drama at the end of the trailer, when the two girls look nervously at each other in the two shot and say ‘You ready’ ‘You bet’, they walk off in slow motion as the title text appears leaving the audience with an enigma.  By the end of the film it becomes apparent that the tagline “a tale of triumph or disaster?” adopts polysemic open ended meaning and can be read as a triumph in that the girls finally bonded but the audience is left wondering whether they will be totally triumphant in their professional goal of winning Wimbledon together. The audience are left to shape the meaning of the trailer and interpret what they understand by the ending through it’s open ended nature.

Due to the time restrictions imposed by the trailer format meaning was also created in other ways such as the use of sound, stereotypical characters and mise en scene.  For example, Sound was used as a narrative device to communicate messages about the plot, characters and what’s to come.  For example, a sound motif is used to reinforce the motivational nature of the coaches interactions with the underdog.  A “boiing” sound effect was also used to add to the ridiculousness of the underdog’s attempts to train.  This use of parallel sound reinforced the image being presented to the audience and added the conventional “chick flick” humour.  The race against time faced by the underdog is emphasized through the focus on the loud ticking of the coaches stopwatch.  Other non diegetic elements of the narrative eg background music are used to establish the tone and mood of the trailer.  Characters “work” on the basis of appearance, clothing, gestures and often embody “typical” traits.  The champion is initially presented as the stereotypical chick flick Queen Bee.  Whilst the underdog is initially the silly bimbo.  Costumes reinforced the representation of the stereotypes. 

Another part of the function of narrative is to make the compression of time invisible to the viewer.  Ellipsis has been used in my trailer as a narrative strategy to organise time clearly moving the narrative forward with a logical order of events.

One of the key features of narrative is to deliver certain gratifications to the audience. My narrative offers the audience a range of “pleasures” or gratifications. In terms of story structure they are “pleasured” by knowing Todorovs pattern unfold before them in a predictable and familiar way.  The character representations are in many ways stereotypical of those found in “chick flicks” and a teenage girls real life!  The key theme of girl rivalry, friendship, teamwork and success or “girl power” are familiar features of the genre and will be within the scope of their previous life experience. The trailer leaves the audience of teenage girls a feel good factor and sense of satisfaction from witnessing and willing a partial resolution to the story as the champion and underdog make friends. They are also left with an enigma (will the girls triumph in the championship) that can only be solved through going to see the full length feature film. 




What do I want from my trailer?

What do I want from my trailer?

After analysing features of other trailers I have identified conventional aspects which I would like to include in my production:

- provide enough content to interest my audience into watching the full film.
- Set the genre of the film and create a feel for the setting.
- provide a suggestion of the storyline.
- Introduce some of the main characters.
- Draw the interest of the audience by displaying attention grabbing footage.
- Incorporate quickly paced clips.
- Slowly builds up from beginning to an exciting end.
- Contains graphics like film title and opening dates.

I will try to achieve some of the above by incorporating the following:

I want my trailer to show the two female main characters and their contrast with each other in terms of character and ability at tennis.

I want there to be a voice over, male voice, that appears only as the set up to a humorous moment or significant moment.

I would like there to be music, two different types. One when Lindsay is struggling to meet the standard of tennis http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kK42LZqO0wA and the other to display a twist in the tail -fast beat when Lynsday starts training hard to be up to the standard of tennis she is playing and when she is approaching the tournament as a much better player (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7U_Lpbk3MyQ)

I want my trailer to mention the directors and the fact that we created my film last year to advertise the fact that the film makers are skilled.

I want the trailer to have plenty of funny moments so that the audience can enjoy it.

I want the trailer to show the character of a clear underdog and show moments of bonding.

I want the trailer to end on a big cliff hanger to make it different from others!

Shooting script thursday the 4th of november

On the Baseline Shooting Script


This Thursday 4th of November we will be filming the 3rd out of 4 parts to my trailer.


2.00pm – Meet in the Gym
2.10pm- Everything should be set up and we should be ready to film
2.10pm-2.50pm- Filming runs as follows
                     
1.Verticle Panning shot of Niaomi and Lindsay , Niaomi looks unipressed at Lindsay, Linsday looks upset.


2. Niaomi hits the ball past Lindsay in practice, Niaomi 'do you have any problems other than that you're useless, a moron and a dork?'- Niaomi looks angry 


3. Over the shoulder shot from Roberts shoulder,(setting changing room/ corridor)-Action; Robert and Lindsay having a conversation
Lindsay; ' I will never be good enough'- Lindsay looks like she is about to cry 
Robert; ' If you can meet with triumph and disaster and treat those two imposters just the same'- Robert looks upset for Lindsay 


4. Lindsay hitting shots, doing push ups, she eventually gets one past Niaomi
Zoom in on Niaomi’s face


5. Speech; Niaomi ' you’re getting good squirt'- Niaomi looks happy for Lindsay Cutaway to Lindsay’s face, Zoom in Lindsay smiles

2.50- 3.00pm
3 photo graphs to be taken
1.       Niaomi and Lindsay stood side by side looking like rivals
2.       Rob writing into a notepad
3.       Linsday smiling with her tennis racket

Monday, 16 April 2012

Magazine cover Improved

After editing on Photoshop I have now improved my Magazine cover.  I have used a single full page image, with the background erased using the magic wand tool, in order to comply with conventional features of magazine covers.  The image is now overlaid with text to give a more professional look.

Friday, 16 March 2012

My Main Task; Trailer 2

I have now edited my trailers music by creating the music myself on garage band. It sounds much more upbeat, chick flicky and girly which also helps create the conventional comedy element. I used a series of drums, beats, clives and guitars to create the piece.


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